Mar 19, 2012

Blog Tour: Guest post by J. A. Redmerski


J.A. Redmerski is the author of the YA/adult crossover/Paranormal Romance THE MAYFAIR MOON and the not-so-young-adult novel, DIRTY EDEN. THE MAYFAIR MOON is her first published novel and the first in The Darkwoods Trilogy. She is currently working on the sequel to TMM, titled KINDRED.


I wish I had a place more interesting than my bedroom to call my ‘writing cave’, but truthfully, I have a hard time writing anywhere else. I’ve tried Starbucks, the Barnes & Noble café, even the library—just can’t do it! Public places, no matter how well they are designed for peace and quiet, just have too many distractions.

The best time for me to write is early in the morning while my three kids are in school and I’m alone in the apartment with our Maltese, Ares. For years now, I’ve struggled with getting my writing time in due to my job, which has taken up most of my day. I’m happy to say that recently that problem has changed, which gives me time to write and that is most important me.


 
The map on the wall behind my chair is there because of a novel I started writing last year. And of course, I always have my Venti Vanilla Iced Latte from Starbucks, which is mandatory.  I like to surround myself with inspiration, whether it’s random things upon the walls (also like my kids artwork you can see behind my monitor in the next photo), or the window beside my desk that lets in the necessary natural light. Nature is very important to me and I would love to find a place outside where I could write comfortably. For now, I settle with the window.


Hey! It’s the Winchester brothers and Castiel on my desktop! Gotta love Supernatural. J And that’s my dog, Ares. I named him after Ares God of War on Xena: Warrior Princess, but when his hair grows out he looks more like a ‘Zeus’. The only thing that really makes him ‘war-like’ though is his black and grey skull n’ bones sweater he wears in the winter.

So that’s my writing cave. It’s simple, compact and lacks trees, but it gets the job done!

Blog Tour: The Slippery Art of Book Reviewing


Title: The Slippery Art of Book Reviwing
Author: Mayra Calvani and Anne K. Edwards
Publisher: Twilight Times Books               
Publish Date: 15 June 2008
Pages:  188
ISBN: 978-1-933353-22-7
Source: blog tour
Genre:educational, reference
Series: n/a

Are you passionate about books? Do you have the desire to share your thoughts about a book with readers, yet are unsure about what makes a good review? Are you curious about the influence reviews have on readers, booksellers, and librarians?
If you’re an experienced reviewer, The Slippery Art of Book Reviewing will serve as an excellent reference tool and amalgam of resources. If you’re a beginner, this book will show you how to write a well-written, honest, objective and professional book review. It will also teach you:
·         How to read critically
·         How to differentiate the various types of reviews
·         How to rate books
·         How to prevent amateurish mistakes
·         How to deal with the ethics and legalities of reviewing
·         How to tell the difference between a review, a book report, and a critique
·         How to start your own review site
·         How to publish your reviews on dozens of sites and even make money while you’re at it, and much more

When I was first sent the e-mail to review this book, I was excited because it sounded like it would be an educational book and I would learn something about how I review books.  Granted, that DID happen.  What I didn’t expect was that I wouldn’t know HOW to review it.  I don’t normally review educational material, so I will tell you what I thought of it and give you some of what it in the book.  This has been the most difficult review I have had to write because I cannot give away too many pearls.

While reading, I took some notes on some things that I wanted to start doing in my reviews. I hope to incorporate them sometime this year.  It was very instructional and went over the differences between a review and a book report.  I will say that when I started this blog, my reviews would fall into the “book report” pile, but thankfully, my “voice” has grown and now I feel that my reviews would fall into a review category.   I learned what NOT to do in a review also.  Some of the points they made are things that I set when I first started this blog, so that made me feel good about it.

Aside from those things, this book also tells you five keys to being a good reviewer. I think everyone needs to go over these to ensure that their reviews are putting forth the image that they want to represent.  Some of the other things that The Slippery Art of Book Reviewing goes over are: how to write a book review; rating books; types of reviews; what to do if a book is terrible; and when to post your reviews.  Other than that, there are resources that helpful to reviewers of all kinds and examples of reviews to help you learn the principles that they are teaching.

Overall, this book has educated me on the process needed for well-written, thought-provoking reviews.  I am sure that I will be using this book as a reference as needed.  There is an excerpt on the blog for this book.  It not only included the preface to the book, but also a partial table of contents.  I encourage everyone to check it out!

I like how the design of this cover incorporates a book and then outlines the words in the title of the book.  I felt that this cover is fitting for this book because it deals with pulling information out of books and putting them into reviews.

 By
Mayra Calvani
  1. Thou shall have no other gods before the reader. The review is not about the author, nor the publisher, and especially, not about you, the reviewer. Reviews are all about the reader. Don’t try to impress with pompous words in an attempt to glorify yourself or appear scholarly. Give readers simplicity and clarity. They’ll appreciate it. If they want verbose and fancy, they can read Shakespeare.

  1. Thou shall not lie. Honesty is what defines your trade. Without it, you’re doing nothing but selling copy. When you give facile praise or sugar-coat a book, sooner or later readers will take you for what you are: a phony.

  1. Thou shall try not to offend the author. Just as honesty is important, so is tact. There’s no need to be harsh or mean. A tactfully written, well-meant negative review should offer the author insight into what is wrong with the book. Instead of saying, “This is a terrible novel!” say, “This book didn’t work for me for the following reasons…”

  1. Thou shall not eat the evaluation. Some fledgling reviewers write a long blurb of the book and leave out the evaluation. The evaluation is the most important part of a review. A summary of the plot is not an evaluation. Saying, “I really liked this book” is not an evaluation. The evaluation tells the reader what is good and bad about the book, and whether or not it is worth buying.

  1. Thou shall not reveal spoilers. Nobody likes to be told the ending of a movie before having watched it. The same thing is valid for a book. If you give spoilers in your review, not only do you lessen the reader’s reading experience but you also risk being sued by the publisher or author.

  1. Thou shall honor grammar, syntax, and punctuation. Don’t be one of those reviewers who are more in love with the idea of seeing their name online than making sure their reviews are well-written and thorough. Your reviews may hang around on the internet for years to come and will reflect on your level as a writer. Run a spell check, edit, revise, and polish your review, as if you were posting a short story. Get a good book on grammar, and punctuation, take an online course or listen regularly to podcasts such as The Grammar Girl.

  1. Thou shall honor deadlines. If you join a review site where the turnaround for reviews is 3 weeks, then you should respect that agreement. If you promise the author to have the review ready in two months, you should honor this too. Be honest and straight forward from the beginning. If you’re so busy your turnaround is six months, make sure to let the person know. If for any reasons you cannot meet the deadline, contact the person and let him know. It’s your responsibility to maintain a do-able schedule.

  1. Thou shall not be prejudiced against thy neighbor. Don’t assume that a self-published or small press book is poorly written. Give it a fair chance and let it speak for itself. Likewise, never assume a book published by a major NY house has to be good. You’d be surprised by the high quality of some small press books by unknown authors, as opposed to those written by big name authors whose titles are often in the bestseller lists. In general, most subsidy books are mediocre, but there are always exceptions. If you’ve had bad experiences with subsidy books, then don’t request them nor accept them for review. If you decide to review one, though, don’t be biased and give it a fair chance.

  1. Thou shall not become an RC addict. RC stands for Review Copy. Requesting RCs can get out of control. In fact, it can become addictive. You should be realistic about how many books you can review. If you don’t, pretty soon you’ll be drowning in more RCs than you can handle. When this happens, reading and reviewing can change from a fun, pleasurable experience into a stressful one. If you’re feeling frazzled because you have a tower of books waiting to be reviewed, learn to say NO when someone approaches you for a review and stop requesting RCs for a while. Unless you’re being paid as a staff reviewer for a newspaper or magazine, reviewing shouldn’t get in the way of your daily life.

  1. Thou shall honor thy commitment. Remember that any books you’ve agreed to review beforehand are being sent to you in exchange for a review. If your policy is not to review every book you receive, state it clearly on your blog or site so the author or publisher will know what to expect. If you have agreed to review a book, but have a valid reason for not reviewing it, let the review site editor, author, publisher, or publicist know.


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Mar 17, 2012

Immortal Beloved

Title: Immortal Beloved
Author: Cate Tiernan
Publisher: Little Brown and Company
Publish Date: 07 September 2010
Pages: 407
ISBN: 978-0-316-03591-0
Source: Bought
Genre: Young Adult, Paranormal
Series: Immortal Beloved
Other books in series: Darkness Falls, Eternally Yours (06 November 2012)
Nastasya has spent the last century living as a spoiled, drugged-out party girl. She feels nothing and cares for no one. But when she witnesses her best friend, a Dark Immortal, torture a human, she realizes something's got to change. She seeks refuge at a rehab for wayward immortals, where she meets the gorgeous, undeniably sexy Reyn, who seems inexplicably linked to her past.

Nastasya finally begins to deal with life, and even feels safe--until the night she learns that someone wants her dead.


What do you live for when you live forever?  We have heard that tag line in many stories before.  This one is different, however. Nastasya, aka Nasty or Nas, is an immortal.  It starts out telling you about her and her friends, Incy, Boz, Sratton, Cicely and Katy, and their partying in London.  This wasn't different than any other night for them. At least it started out that way.  Something happened that night that woke Nas up.  She realized that things that were happening scared her.  So, she did what any rational person would do – she ran.  She knew right where she was going to go.  She had previously met River, who had a compound in West Lowing, Massachusetts for wayward immortals. 

When Nas arrives,she cannot find it because it is cloaked.  At first, she doesn't think that anyone could help her on her journey to become a better person and wants to leave.  She has it set in her mind even before she spent the night that she was going to leave in the morning.  She meets other immortals at River Edge.  Namely, Reyn, Jess, Asher, River, Solis and Nell, among others.  Nas learns things at Rivers Edge that she wasn't planning on.  Could this be the thing that she is looking for?

Even though I thought that this book was a slow read, it kept me captivated.  It wasn't one of those books which were like a rollercoaster where they have climax after climax, problem after problem.  Immortal Beloved was more subtle.  There were parts of the book that were downright funny and out of place at the same time.  Nas is the narrator and throughout the whole book, except for a few instances, she isn't talking with an audience, but rather relating a story that includes flashbacks into her previous experiences. It is in those instances that you really get the sense that you are reliving not only her experiences, but her her thoughts as well. "Hey, I'm just reporting it how it is, people." is what she says in one part of the book.

The cover shows a woman, whom I presume to be Nas, with a flowing dress.  The words Immortal Beloved are down the middle of the cover and it has the color red on it.  I think this cover really works for this book.   It just shows you a picture of her, so you don’t get a real sense of who she is, but I like this cover nonetheless.  On the back cover, the tag line reads “New name, new town, new life.”  This is representative of the life that Nas lives as an immortal.


Nas. She goes through an enlightening period when she is at Rivers Edge. She understands things and has new experiences and feelings. It is at Rivers Edge where she learns what is important.

Reyn. He is trying to make his life better. That is the reason that he is at Rivers Edge. Yes, he has problems, both in the present and the past, but he is working through them.

 •River. She lets wayward immortals come to her place in West Lowing, Massachusetts, where she teaches them how to be better and appreciate the things in life. She keeps asking Nas what she wants and works toward that goal.

 •The teachers at Rivers Edge. They really help Nas and the other immortals learn.

 
Nell. She has some serious issues.

Incy, Boz and her other friends in her immortal group.  In the first chapter, Nas calls them her "gang."  They want and do things that are separate from what Nas is learning at Rivers Edge



Mar 16, 2012

The Hunger Games: District 13


District 13 is a district of Panem that was supposedly destroyed by the Capitol during the first rebellion. It is said to be uninhabitable, the ruins still smoldering from the toxic bombs dropped on it. However, the district actually agreed to pretend to be dead in exchange for the Capitol leaving them alone. Its industries were mining graphite and nuclear science/technology. This is the reason that the Capitol agreed to leave them alone.


District 13's leader is President Coin. It is unclear where District 13 is located. Mockingjay gives a hint that it is under the ruins of Washington D.C.

You learn more about District 13 in Catching Fire and  Mockingjay.



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Mar 15, 2012

Guest Post: The Hunger Games

"I was killed in the 63rd Hunger Games by being stung by a swarm of tracker jackers."

"I was killed by thinking it was okay to stroke a snake."


Tracker jackers?  Stroking snakes?  What in the world's going on?


When tweets like these appeared in my twitter stream, my eyebrows nearly reached my hairline.


Thankfully, a couple of twitter friends introduced me to a sweet new site; HungerNames.com


For fans of The Hunger Games, it gives readers an identity in the THG world.  The minute you visit the URL, you're treated to your own Hunger Games name, the year you participated, and your fate.


This is what I received:


After an initial name is given, readers can click for more names/fates by clicking "Change your name."


That's all there is to it. It's a simple idea, and the fates range from silly to serious.


I'm curious if the site spits out any winners of a Hunger Game.  I clicked several times but didn't get one.  Apparently, I am doomed to die.


HungerNames.com is a fantastic site for fans of The Hunger Games to amuse themselves for a minute or two.


Hopefully you end up with a cooler name than Toodles Pickerdod.  I mean, Toodles?  Really?



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The Hunger Games: District 12



District 12 was one of the poorest, most ridiculed districts in the nation of Panem. Located in the Appalachian Mountains, District 12 specialized in coal mining.  District 12 had not won the Games for many years prior to The Hunger Games, when Haymitch Abernathy, an alcoholic and an embarrassment to the district, won the 50th Annual Games, or the second Quarter Quell.

District 12 consisted of three different areas: the merchant section, the Victors' Village, and The Seam. 

Although he grew up in the merchant area of District 12, Peeta's childhood was less than desirable, as his family life was difficult. His father was kind, but his mother was known to beat Peeta and his two brothers if they made a mistake.

Ever since he was five years old, Peeta had a crush on Katniss Everdeen. On the first day of school, Peeta's father pointed out Katniss, saying that he wanted to marry her mother, but ultimately she married a coal miner. Peeta was confused why someone would marry a coal miner instead of his father, but Mr. Mellark explained that when Mr. Everdeen sang, the birds stopped to listen. Later, Katniss sang for their music class, and Peeta realized he was in love with her when he saw that the birds were listening. The two never spoke until the 74th Hunger Games.

Peeta has a very likable personality. Peeta is bold, having announced that he was in love with Katniss to the whole nation; smart, figuring out strategies to use in the Games; and willing to go to extremes to keep Katniss alive. However, in the first book, Peeta told Katniss that he did not expect he would win. He is a great public speaker and is very brave. Peeta is also loving and cares about the people around him, and hates killing unless the pursuer is a threat to himself or Katniss; selfless, for sacrificing his own life for Katniss'; funny, for making those around him laugh even when times were tough; and he always knows exactly what to say to make you feel better and to cheer you up. He is able to work with Haymitch on goals and strategy and unlike Katniss, he is able to keep secrets and is trusted by Haymitch. It is noted throughout the series his deep understanding of situations such as the Hunger Games where he says "I don't want to be just a piece in their Games." It took Katniss much longer for her to understand the same concept.

Peeta's main talents are baking, painting, speaking, camouflage and brute strength. His artistic talents developed from helping out at his parents' bakery by making bread and decorating cakes. His larger build and strength also gives him an advantage during hand-to-hand combat and wrestling, coming in second place in a District 12 wrestling contest. In the Games, he usually carries a knife or a sword, although he rarely uses them in battle as he is not particularly violent and dislikes killing unless it is completely necessary. The Career tributes say that "he is handy with a knife". Peeta has a lot of strength from working at the bakery; Katniss says she's seen him lift bags of flour over a hundred pounds.

"Only I keep wishing I could think of a way to... to show the Capitol they don't own me. That I'm more than just a piece in their games."
―Peeta Mellark


Katniss Everdeen was born on May 8th in District 12. She has straight, black hair, usually in a braid down her back, olive skin, and gray eyes. Katniss was close to her father and spent time hunting with him in the woods. There, he taught her about hunting, nature, and how to use a bow and arrow. Katniss's father also taught her how to swim in an small pond in the woods.

When she was 11 years old, her father died in an explosion underground in the mines where he worked, leaving her to take care of her mother and sister. Katniss related in the book that she still has nightmares about the explosion and the day her father died, five years later. She still woke up screaming for him to run and wondering if he would ever come back to her. She resents her mother for succumbing to the depression caused by her husband's death, which left her unable to care for Katniss and her sister, Primrose Everdeen. Even years after her father's death, Katniss didn't forgive her for sinking into depression and leaving her and Prim alone to fend for themselves so young. The district gave a small amount of money to Katniss's family, allowing for a month grieving period before her mother was expected to get a job. When her mother did not get a job, Katniss was thrust into the role of provider and nurturer. She took on this role to avoid allowing her mother to be deemed an unfit mother, which would send herself and Prim to the community home.

A few weeks before May 8th, when Katniss would be able to sign up for tesserae, her family was already starving and she had succumbed to picking from trash cans. One night, when it was raining, she was yelled at by the Baker's wife for looking in their trashcan, even though it was empty. Seeing this, the Baker's son, Peeta Mellark, burned two loaves of bread, earning a beating from his mother. When he went outside with the pretense of feeding the burnt loaves to the pigs, he tossed them to Katniss instead and hurried back inside. The following day at school, Katniss caught Peeta watching her and quickly dropped her gaze, which landed on the first dandelion of the year. The sight of the dandelion made her think of the hours spent in the woods with her father, and she started utilizing the skills her father had taught her to find food and trade. She increased her hunting and foraging skills, selling the illegal food at The Hob, the local Black Market where she made most of her living. Katniss could never shake the connection between Peeta Mellark, the bread that gave her hope, and the dandelion that reminded her that she was not doomed.

During her period of hunting alone, when she was twelve, Katniss met Gale Hawthorne after stumbling across his snares, which had caught a rabbit. At first, he thought that she was going to steal the snares, but after initial coldness, the two became hunting partners and shared their knowledge with one another; Gale teaching Katniss to tie snares, and Katniss sharing her father's herbological knowledge, as well as archery. Katniss eventually gives Gales a bow. Together, the two would trade at the Hob, although their illegal transactions were overlooked by the Peacekeepers who along with Katniss' family, lived off of her haul. The trust between Gale and Katniss grew to a point where they became extremely close friends and knew each other in and out. They became well known in the Hob and in town for selling freshly hunted meat and wild fruits to everyone from the Peacekeepers to the Mayor to the stores in the Hob.

In addition to hunting and foraging, Katniss signed up for tesserae for each of her family members on her birthday each year, providing them with grain and oil. Katniss's underlying motive for doing this was to ensure that Prim would only have her name in the Reaping ball once when the tribute selection for the 74th Hunger Games was to be held.


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Mar 14, 2012

The Hunger Games: District 11



District 11 is one of the poorer districts, right after District 12 in the nation of Panem. Their job is agriculture; orchards, fields of grain, and cotton surround the district. Almost everything they grow goes to the Capitol.

District 11 specializes in agriculture, growing wheat and managing orchards. Rue stated that there are many tracker jacker nests in District 11, leading workers to keep medical leaves on hand. In the orchards small children are sent to high branches to pick the highest fruits. Sometimes during harvest they are given night-vision goggles to allow them to work after dark. Due to the nature of their work, children do have an advantage in the games, as the people of District 11 have a high amount of knowledge of herbs. They work all day; from sunrise to sunset, the people work the fields to send food off to the Capitol. They hardly keep any for themselves. District 11 is many times larger than District 12.

The citizens of District 11 are housed in small shacks.The people of this district are described as having "dark hair and dark skin". Due to this, they may be of African-American, Latin American, Native American, or South Asian decent. However, due to the location of District 11 being confirmed by Suzanne Collins as "the Deep South" (the Justice Building likely being located in what is now Atlanta, GA) it is most commonly assumed that the citizenry of District 11 is overwhelmingly of African-American descent and that the treatment of these citizens is a parallel to antebellum United States slavery (the citizens of District 11 are not allowed surnames, work long hours unpaid in fields and orchards, and are rationed food much more sparingly than in other Districts).

Peeta also noted that the signature bread from this district is a crescent moon shaped roll dotted with seeds.

In District 11, the names, at least of the characters we meet, are all names for some kind of grain.

"This bread came from District 11. I cautiously lift the still warm loaf. What must it have cost the people of District 11 who can't even feed themselves?"
―Katniss



Thresh was reaped for the 74th Hunger Games along with the female tribute from his district, Rue.

During the training sessions, Thresh was confronted and asked to be part of the Career pack but he refused.

During Thresh's interview before the games, Caesar Flickerman tries to help him to be more comfortable and talk. However, Thresh only answers in curt single word answers and remains surly. Katniss is extremely impressed with this, and envied Thresh as he showed such silent, deadly physical power and had no need to make the Capitol like him with an angle.

In the Games, it is highly unlikely that he participated in the bloodbath on day one. He left the Cornucopia and found a field of wheat, which he uses to his advantage by using the wheat for food and also as a source of cover so he could easily hide. The Careers knew where he was, but saw the field as a threat as Thresh would be at a major advantage if they attacked, so they avoided him.

"Just this one time, I let you go. For the little girl. You and me, we're even then. No more owed. You understand?"
―Thresh, to Katniss

Rue was the smallest and youngest female tribute from District 11 who was selected to participate in the 74th Annual Hunger Games. She is described as being small and easily underestimated by other competitors. Rue died in the 74th Hunger Games at the age of 12 when Marvel thrust a spear in her stomach. She had formed an alliance with Katniss Everdeen after warning her about a nest of tracker jackers. Rue decided to trust Katniss only because of the pin she wore over her heart, the famous mockingjay pin. As a memorial of Rue's death, Katniss covered her in flowers and sang to her, indicating to the Capitol that Rue was not just a piece in their games.

Rue and Thresh are described in the book as having dark skin and brown hair. Rue worked with great effort in the orchards in District 11. She would always work from sunrise to sunset, alongside the other citizens of her district. Rue was the oldest child in her family. Despite her size, she was able to jump from tree to tree in the orchards. Her considerable agility and skill at traveling through the tree tops are probably the reason she earned a good score after the private training sessions preceding the 74th Hunger Games (later, Katniss thinks her score was much too low). This ability, and her small stature, made her able to climb the tallest trees in District 11, allowing her to see the flag signaling quitting time first and sing her four note song when work was over. This tune was picked up by the mockingjays in the area, which spread the message through the orchards, letting the others know that the working day was over. Rue claimed that these mockingjays were her special friends.

"I'm very hard to catch. And if they can't catch me, they can't kill me. So don't count me out."
―Rue

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